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Old 11-07-2019, 09:37 AM
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I don't like the location of the tee signs.
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Old 11-07-2019, 10:44 AM
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Nice work DiscPerfect! I really like both cartoons, but I agree if you eliminate 1 or 2 frames from them they would be better.

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Old 11-07-2019, 12:56 PM
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I think you could easily eliminate frames 1, 2, & 11, and combine frames 5, 6 & 7 into one group shot s, with all the people around saying "Nice Shot," and still tell the same story just as effectively.
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This is my first crack at a webcomic, but I am going to try and start one specifically for Disc Golf. Enjoy.

Here is a quick explanation on why disc golfers don't like it when someone says "nice" during their throw...


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Old 11-07-2019, 01:01 PM
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Great, to see the basket moving farther away, as the box teases. :-)

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Old 11-07-2019, 05:53 PM
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@BogeyNoMore Excellent idea, I knew it was a bit too long. I need to hire you to proof my comics haha and good catch @Miello, did not even notice! Also, a tree is missing its leaves haha Working on them it gets easy to miss things

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Old 11-07-2019, 09:45 PM
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This is pretty good stuff. I actually did a comic strip for my HS paper, mainly using characters derived from students and staff.

One of my favorites to attempt were single panel. Getting a joke across in as few panes as possible was always a challenge I really liked.
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Old 11-07-2019, 11:10 PM
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A very quick sketch of an idea that I had that I never finished
I thought that idea seemed familiar. Lol

I like the chain of events in your page.

I also like your Milo Oblong doppelganger.
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Old 11-08-2019, 11:42 AM
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Thinking that some words can influence the flight of a disc is almost as mindblowingly stupid as astrology.
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Old 11-08-2019, 11:48 AM
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^ Never been niced.

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Old 11-08-2019, 11:54 AM
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Whenever I play golf with someone who thinks this is really a thing I nice all their shots. Some hit trees some don't.
Whenever I hit a tree after my shot was niced I blame the nicer.

I'm amazed at how many really get pissed about this. Dumb!
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