Putting form critique appreciated

[KingofKings696]

https://youtu.be/B_pxE6NEzTI

I had to lower resolution a little to get it to upload from my phone but otherwise just let me know what you think.

 

[DiscJunkie]

Would love to help, but the link does not work.

 

[KingofKings696]

Huh that's odd it comes up for me?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B_pxE6NEzTI&feature=youtu.be

how about this copied url from the video while open?