lenfantsuave
Bogey Member
As for the commentary...
Avery is a very smart and insightful commentator.
If you can get past the excessive verbiage and the self-importance.
Someone please tell Avery:
1. That he isn't getting paid by the word.
2. They aren't going to deduct his pay if he lets a few silent seconds pass so we can watch the action.
3. His commentary would be better if he remembered that he should only speak when he has something new to contribute (see #1 above)
4. He is there to inform us and enlighten us, not prove that he is the smartest man alive.
5. Self-diminishment goes a long way toward drawing the listener into the unfolding drama.
6. The action is the "thing", not the commentator(s).
7. Listen to Jamie...
I would contend that Avery's problem is more that he doesn't know what to say when his go to lines or the "script" doesn't work. The reason everyone loves Nate and Jerm so much is because they are witty and fluid. Avery is like that guy I know at work who speaks as fast as possible to make sure he says all of his lines when making a sale. It kind of works I guess, but he's way less genuine and dynamic than someone who just knows how to have a conversation with people who happen to be buying stuff from him.
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